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your Door was open.
You were dancing upon splintered peices of wood...your violin.Swaying from side to side
With a empty wine bottle in one hand you danced to Schubert and Motzart,your protectors.

I'll never play it,you screamed.Never.
You Looked so human,so helpless.A girl Lost in a lullabye.I held you and tried not to think
about what you had done.

I tried not to think
I tried not to
I tried not.


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You had cought me in my whirlwind.A dance of pain and joy,sober and drunk.YOu stood in my doorway
worried.scared.My secret had gotten to you...all of you.I screamed,i screamed for my violin.My violin,my violin
shattered peices on the floor.And I screamed for your love.


Your Love,Your Love,

Shattered Peices On The Floor.
©2004-2009 ~VanishedTears
:iconvanishedtears:

Author's Comments

1.Secret
2.Rain
3.Violin
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Credits:lilfuzz6
For The Preveiw Image:P
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Bold:Her
Italics:Him

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:iconvinesofsilver:
Wow, that's really beautiful, very well written theme, great work.

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I'm in love,
oh I love what I can convince you of .
'cause I'm a prophet by trade
and a salesman by blood.
-derek webb.
:iconlilfuzz6:
beautiful writing

also, nice work on the eyes =)

thanks for the link/credit :hug:

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:iconpeacockmask:
Beautiful poem! The eye looks so soft and pretty! I liek the teardrob! :D

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:iconsce-violinist:
Very dramatic... i love it!

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~You are your best thing
:iconicemoon-wraith:
Wow. This is just so amazing and powerfully written...watch your grammer and spelling, but i got so caught up I found I didn't care. Well done!
:iconvelvetrose72689:
WOW I LOVE IT :heart:
:rose:

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